As our journal's managing editor Jim Lewis put the matter recently, "I cannot think of a better way to show appreciation and support for
Firestone than to continue to build this community that he started."
Firestone Feinberg, the founder and editor of Verse-Virtual, the online journal and community of poets I have been fortunate to be part of for the last five years, passed last Monday.
I had just written these comments on a few of the many poems that particularly impressed me in the May 2020 issue of Verse-Virtual.org. As Jim implied, we can best honor him by doing what we do.
So here are some thoughts on a few of the poems in the May issue of Verse-Virtual I am particularly fond of. You can find all of these poems, and many others at Verse-Virtual May 2020
Firestone Feinberg, the founder and editor of Verse-Virtual, the online journal and community of poets I have been fortunate to be part of for the last five years, passed last Monday.
I had just written these comments on a few of the many poems that particularly impressed me in the May 2020 issue of Verse-Virtual.org. As Jim implied, we can best honor him by doing what we do.
So here are some thoughts on a few of the poems in the May issue of Verse-Virtual I am particularly fond of. You can find all of these poems, and many others at Verse-Virtual May 2020
Barbara Crooker's depiction of this time
of year in "It's May," -- "the time of year when
everything we’ve been waiting for
opens" -- accords very much with my own thoughts. The idea of the world's
'opening' is wittily captured in the images that follow:
"The iris wave their flags,
every shade of the rainbow,
and the peonies have unclenched
their fists"
The poem continues an imagistic walk
through this season of delights -- "An Oriental poppy is about
to stamp its orange exclamation mark"
--
leading
to a nature-centered pitch for an earth-friendly politics. If I wasn't already
marching in this parade I would swiftly join it. It's time to plant a
perennials garden on the White House lawn. (It can't hurt.)
Two strong poems Marc Alan Di
Martino walk us down the other side of the street. Skillfully and
affectingly told, "Dark Matters" connects its 'matter,' a piece
of family history, to universal themes:
"The blades of life
spare no one—eventually, each of us
is butchered in one fashion or another
like Isaac on the chopping block."
And
I thought its ending (which I won't
spoil here) was perfect.
Neera Kashyap's satisfying
exploitation of the villanelle form, "Self-Rule" sees both dark and
light in a world imaged by the poem's first line:
"There is work to be done on
this hill."
After several tightly pinioned instances
--
"The rabbit runs, paws tremble, thoughts mill;
Stumbles and falls, sorrows break in."
-- the poem's final lines fulfill its form and offer a satisfying reflection.
Tamara Madison's "Seeing Paris"
is not about the conventional associations of its two-word title. The irony of
what it is about makes for a moving poem. The truth of the poem's observation
that many of us"even
learn
to free their faces of feeling,
to meet the world with a mask
that is smooth and shiny and which may
indeed look good, but we are not fooled"
...seems to me to take on an even stronger
impact now that we are so often meeting one another behind the barrier of
actual, physical masks.
A deep and complex poem about a troubling reality, the extent to which we all wear masks. And what we wish them to say.
A deep and complex poem about a troubling reality, the extent to which we all wear masks. And what we wish them to say.
David Graham's "Accidental
Blessings" is another poem that suggests there is so much more to life --
and much of it pretty hairy -- than we're likely to put on that other kind of
officially made-up 'face,' the resume.
While
the poem's tone is relaxed and informal, its tally of bumps and bruises is
scarily impressive: A little childhood brain fever, a near-miss run-over, a swinging
collision with a tree; pills not taken, fights ducked. It's enough to prompt a
class assignment on near-misses (start making lists...). The poem ends with a
vividly phrased toast to survival I won't spoil here by quoting.
As so often in the past, I am
grateful to Marilyn Taylor for the pleasure of form. Her sixteen-liner,
"Piano Overture" finds the essence of a certain species of formal
occasion, the twice-a-year visits of the piano tuner. I can't help quoting
these two lines
"brandishing his hammer like a
sword,
we watched him wring concordance
from the air."
Nor
can I refrain from pointing out what a beautiful rhyme "concordance from
the air" makes with the line it rhymes ending with the words "clean
and spare." Please read this poem if you haven't. It requires something more
than a semiannual visit.
These and so many more strong poems
can be found at http://www.verse-virtual.org/poems-and-articles.html