The days of
June go flying by. Why does this happen when the the 'days' are actually
longer? Sometimes things move too fast to pose them for a picture and get the
details right. Then we try to reconstruct the good moments, and the sad ones, looking
back.
However, as
David Graham says in his poem in the June issue of Verse-Virtual, "Home
Movie 1930," when too much time passes the images we keep have "gone
historical."
The poem continues:
we cannot trust the past to tell us
The poem continues:
we cannot trust the past to tell us
anything
anymore, or even to speak
in the same language.
in the same language.
I
particularly admired the poem's closing evocation of the lost time of home
movies: "as toddlers stagger after balls on the gray lawn— all still
moving their mouths as if underwater."
WF Lantry's
poem "A Season's Requiem" has a similar looking-backwards address. The
poet remembers a singer's voice in a time of grief with these beautifully paced
lines:
grafting
her harmonies across my pain,
changing my loosened tethers into bonds,
changing my loosened tethers into bonds,
her voice,
like shifted days, answers my thirst
with early rain, and brings to mourning, ease.
with early rain, and brings to mourning, ease.
Still on
the subject of lost times and remembered persons, I felt a personal pang on
reading Alan Clark's poem "For My Father." The poem seemed to express
the desire for a closer connection in a better place -- beautifully encapsulated
in the lines --
Where all the little wars we didn’t want to fight
Are forgiven, are as if they’d never been, were only
A few minor discords in the sovereign light of love.
Where all the little wars we didn’t want to fight
Are forgiven, are as if they’d never been, were only
A few minor discords in the sovereign light of love.
If we wish
to fly away to that better place, perhaps we can follow the birds. In Barbara
Crooker's poem "The Green Blouse" (written after a painting by
Bonnard reproduced in the journal), the poet tells us of two bluejays "bluer than the sky/ and
they know it." These fortunate creatures have the perfect attitude toward
the passing days of June of any other other month:
....Every
day, there’s another cup of sunlight.
They tilt back their heads, and they drink it all in.
They tilt back their heads, and they drink it all in.
One the
subject of birds, Emily Strauss's delightful "Index of Western Birds of
North America" consists of 18 photos and accompanying one-line poems. I
was particularly intrigued by a bird named "phainopepla: dictionary black
crested help."
Yes, I thought,
the name "phainopepla" certainly makes one run to a dictionary.
On a
similar note, Kevin Heaton, a poet who enjoys whimsical words, concludes
"Poet on Cannabis" with reference to "epiphytics in tall osmunda"
to describe "an immaculate collaboration between maximum greens." Epiphytes
are plants that grow from other plants without parasitically drawing on the
host (saw some recently in a Florida everglade growing off of trees). Osmunda,
I learn after help from the Internet is a genus of temperate-zone ferns.
Thanks, Kevin, for the vocabulary expansion.
Robert
Wexelblatt gives us a trio of poems that cycle around the music of Bach and the
closely related question raised by the title of the first poem, "Was Bach
an Alien?" The poem begins in Olympus.
When
I first read the Greek myths, those sacred
scriptures shrunk to fairy tales, I noticed
how captivated the gods were by us,
how they couldn’t resist mingling with us,
meddling, impeding, even copulating.
I pictured how tedious it would have
been without us whose meanest village is
livelier than Olympus.
scriptures shrunk to fairy tales, I noticed
how captivated the gods were by us,
how they couldn’t resist mingling with us,
meddling, impeding, even copulating.
I pictured how tedious it would have
been without us whose meanest village is
livelier than Olympus.
He then
takes us to outer space where Glenn Gould's recording of Bach's Well-Tempered
Clavier is being beamed to any or all minds out there capable of listening
to music. (Are we cheating? I thought on reading this. Shouldn't we be sending
'Sweet Caroline' to give them an idea of who we really are?) Some finely tuned
lines later in which the poet raises this very question -- "Lewis
Thomas cracked, 'That’s bragging.'" -- the poem works back to the Olympians
with beautifully expressed conclusion.
... I
too like imagining
those aliens, brainy enough to construct
a phonograph, rapt, listening to Gould’s
warm C-major prelude, struck dumb by the
ensuing fugue, and jealous as the gods.
those aliens, brainy enough to construct
a phonograph, rapt, listening to Gould’s
warm C-major prelude, struck dumb by the
ensuing fugue, and jealous as the gods.
Luis Neer's poem "No Shadow #1" also offers a fresh connection to the universe.
By rising
from your bed
in the morning
walking out into the wind
you have entered outer space
in the morning
walking out into the wind
you have entered outer space
"The universe
is here," Neer's poem concludes: "You have held it in your hands."
Trish Hopkinson's poem "Corked" opens a structurally adventuresome form that I learned (after inquiring) was a villanelle. The poems begins by pulling the cork on a battle of wine ("Bordeaux, it fills the bowl on stem on base.") for the first glass and ends with pouring the final one.
Bordeaux,
it fills the bowl on stem on base.
Glass four emptied, no cork put back in place.
Glass four emptied, no cork put back in place.
Another of
her poems, "Footnote to a Footnote" builds on itself like a spell or
an incantation. "Jacuzzis are holy./ Garage door openers are holy..." Any
further attempt to excerpt would lose the power of the poem's music.
"The
Last Days of My Life" Mark Jackley writes in the poem of that name -- one
more turn on the theme of looking back -- may resemble the last days of high school.
The days
are long, the nights are sweet
and if you lived by the sea
you sat on the sea wall, which held back
everything except
your laughter and all the delicious,
insane, intoxicating
talk of holding on,
of staying there forever.
and if you lived by the sea
you sat on the sea wall, which held back
everything except
your laughter and all the delicious,
insane, intoxicating
talk of holding on,
of staying there forever.
I never had such days in high school (college was more fun), but Jackley's poem makes me feel them.
I also feel
the days, or places, or stops along the way evoked by Firestone Feinberg's poem,
an untitled lyric that begins:
And along the way were shining souls
Who came to walk beside me as I traveled through the land
But little did I see them -- ...
Who came to walk beside me as I traveled through the land
But little did I see them -- ...
The poems
sent shivers through me. I think we're all still walking that way, and through
that land, and I just hope we can glimpse those "shining souls."
Here's the
link to the June issue of Verse-Virtual:
http://www.verse-virtual.com/
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