All aboard
for October!
It's also time to kill the wasps, Dick Allen's poem
"Hornet's Nest" reminds us, an act both intriguing and sad, and ultimately
sacramental:
Hundreds of them, accursed, their papery gray masses
hidden in eaves, in the junctures of two-by-fours,
or hanging in shrubs or behind olive branch foliage,
wait to be opened.
hidden in eaves, in the junctures of two-by-fours,
or hanging in shrubs or behind olive branch foliage,
wait to be opened.
Every sentence in this poem makes you feel again, or truly
recognize for the first time, something that you know you've felt attempting this act yourself :
"And at the heart of everything, the larger body of sorrow..."
Allen's poem leads us to that heart of things. Every
word counts here. To read the rest of them see http://www.verse-virtual.com/dick-allen-2016-october.html
In his fabulous poem "Cities," Robert Wexelblatt
levels his poetic calibrator at cities to evoke, tabulate, and analyze as (his
poem tells us), "God levels his great eye on cities to punish or exalt..."
In a Whitmanic act of encompassing the world's epic fullness, his poem continues, "[God] aims His
huge finger at them as to say
This is what I charge you to build, I want walls, libraries,
bodegas,
ghettos, schoolyards, hot-dog stands, electric grids, trash trucks,
sewers, playgrounds; I want bullies and brokers, matrons and
call girls, lawyers and legal heirs."
ghettos, schoolyards, hot-dog stands, electric grids, trash trucks,
sewers, playgrounds; I want bullies and brokers, matrons and
call girls, lawyers and legal heirs."
Filled with the wonders of the modern world, the poem finds all the right words
to evoke all the right ideas and take us up and down the avenues of the human
attempt to accomplish what God -- whatever that word means here --
commands when he human flesh and mortar to combine in the making of a "City." The poem is a recipe for making a poem, as the city is the
poem of itself:
Go on, add, subtract, multiply, make a
city of yourselves spread out like the theory of bodies, like My
immense Leviathan, make a Behemoth of patiently accreted cells,
just as I made you..."
Sonia Greenfield's "Four Ghost Stories" tells us
about some of the people who used to live here among us, the so-far survivors of
the cities and towns our lives in part enable. The protagonist of Ghost Story
(1) tell us she hitched a ride. The results are lyrical: "His radio played
songscity of yourselves spread out like the theory of bodies, like My
immense Leviathan, make a Behemoth of patiently accreted cells,
just as I made you..."
on the AM dial. I left a fog on his windows.
The road here is fully blind and mudded to rust
with half-melted snow. I was dropped off
in a brown-leaf ditch."
The road here is fully blind and mudded to rust
with half-melted snow. I was dropped off
in a brown-leaf ditch."
All the lines in each of these four poems sing like those,
as if spirits are singing their beautiful death songs. The speakers of these poems
made me think of Plath's famous lines (though without Plath's bravado):
"Dying is an art. I do it well. I do it so it feels like hell."
Ghost number 4, a child, recalls "Once, in a public bathroom,
I took the hand of a stranger, but she shook
me free." Between this heart-breaker and the next observation -- "I could bedevil my mother in her room, but there’s no point." -- lies not a single word. The artistry is breathless.
Ghost number 4, a child, recalls "Once, in a public bathroom,
I took the hand of a stranger, but she shook
me free." Between this heart-breaker and the next observation -- "I could bedevil my mother in her room, but there’s no point." -- lies not a single word. The artistry is breathless.
To read the
rest of these poems, and all the others see:
http://www.verse-virtual.com/poems-and-articles.html
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