I found not only a lot of fine poems
in the February edition of Verse-Virtual, but a lot of wisdom. Poems live in our
thoughts not for what they say so much as how they say it. We may 'know' these truths,
or realize we've been told them (or shown them) before, but now we feel them as
well.
In his poem "Mahayana in
Vermont," Sydney Lea is telling us that 'nothing' happens in the course of
a long hike taken "with three dogs through the rain." But we know
what 'nothing' means after hearing about the grouse, and the deer flies, and
the "late trillium," and the counted steps. We know that 'nothing'
actually means 'everything,' and are not surprised, but in fact happily
gratified when the poem sums this 'nothing' up as "a mystic sense of
well-being/ in quietly chanted numbers."
In Alan Walowitz's poem "String
Theory," a guru morphs into a Jewish mother when he responds to a bill of
complaints with the advice "Things could be worse." It's a pleasing
conjunction, offering an insight into both roles. Our guru may not know
everything; and our mothers (Jewish or otherwise) are likely to know something
valuable about their children. This recognition leads to a slightly shocking,
but worthily eye-opening embrace of peace from an unconventional perspective (which I
won't completely spoil by quoting it here). Aging brings complaints, but it
beats the alternatives.
In Penelope Moffat's poem "My Cat is the Buddha,"
the pleasure lies in how the proposition is advanced.
Yea though I do call her
Smoke
her name is God.
Though I murmur “silly child”
she is intellect made flesh.
her name is God.
Though I murmur “silly child”
she is intellect made flesh.
Serious things can be said
lightly, and the wonderfully ear-pleasing arcane vernacular of sacred texts is
out there for us to play with, as this poem so pleasurably does.
The fleshly intellect of the cat called "Smoke"
is realized in warm fur, a "nubbly tongue," and the virtue of breathing
her "honest breath" into a bedside water glass. Animals too can be a
sacred text. What pleasure to read about this one.
Playful and fun as well, Kate Sontag's poem “The Many
Lives of Foam,” invents a new world of "karma," the February issue theme that got me noticing
the wisdom of these poems. It turns out that foam gets around. It's "a fleck of cappuccino...
a white mustache on my future lover’s upper lip," also the "lather on your father's face," and
the bubbling creation of "soap & glycerin" that finds a
kind of ultimate release in a "roving rainbow." And a lot of other stages
in between. Sometimes in the karmic journey of rebirths, everything is relative. Sometimes the thing to do is just look at it from a
different angle.
Judy Kronenfield's moving and
impressive series of poems "Saving the Dead" suggests to me that we
'save' them best by remembering them. I'm particularly moved by a poem about the
acute memory loss in parents or other aged relatives (that many of us have
already experienced in family members), a condition described in the acutely
titled "The Withering of Their State."
"...the scales fall
from their eyes, and they fall asleep
in each other's chairs, and thine
is mine, and now is then, and mildly,
with the most gracious of oh?s,
they allow themselves to be
removed..."
The wisdom here consists of seeing things as they are, offering the compassion that we would wish shown to ourselves... and simply letting be.
Tom
Montag's fine contribution to the February issue of five concentrated
reflections includes a couple of unblinking looks at the persistence of darkness
in all lives. A kind of insight and wisdom that perhaps flows from "the
stranger/ angel in my nature," to quote from his poem "The Sadness of
Happiness." As this poem says, "between kiss and climax/
there is always this darkness."
there is always this darkness."
The
somewhat longer lyric "Walking the Tracks on a Warm December Day"
suggests a particulary Decemberish insight consistent with the time of year
when the light is at its briefest, the dark its longest. The poem asks,
"Train in the distance, or not?" But the poem knows the train is
always out there, and will someday arrive.
These are a
few of the poems that spoke me in the February Verse-Virtual. Many other fine
poems can found at
http://www.verse-virtual.com/poems-and-articles.html
http://www.verse-virtual.com/poems-and-articles.html
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